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Super super super super duper late HAPPY BIRTHDAY :iconsapphirra:!!!!! Hope you like it?

I was going to do Homura but since :iconkheetza: was drawing her, I drew Menma instead.

BUT, I sketched a lot, did a lot of WIPs, didn't like any of them. Then when I started experimenting with my (kinda) new style, I got this and I liked it so here you go~

I like this painting style/colouring but the ruffles were hard to do QwQ
and what happened to practicing thing neat lineart?! OTL
I'm sorry, the background looks kinda dodgy as well =3=""

Tools:
- Forever faithful Sai
- My beloved tablet

Time:
...erm...3 days since I was experimenting very slowly... :L

Menma © AnoHana
Image size
1500x2000px 2.22 MB
© 2012 - 2024 Hibikiri
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Wow. May I start out by saying that I love your style!! You did a wonderful job on this! The soft lines blend with the colors to create a brilliant work of art. Plus, the anatomy is nearly flawless!

The only things that bothered me were the eyes and bow. While I do love the way you used your shading, I think the texture you gave it made it seem out of place. The bow and eyes need to be more soft. Also, now that I look more closely; the shading and shadows on the face seem kind of splotchy, I suggest blurring them in with the rest of the face texture.
Overall, you did a great job with this. The wrinkles and details make it stand out to your viewers.

Keep up the good work!
~Stephanie Boyd <3